Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Blog # 18 --Draft of Research Project

Melissa Capece
December 6, 2011
Eng. 3029
Draft of Research Project



Bilingual Education 

                My chosen focus for this Research Project reflects on the question, “How can Writing Centers or Tutors help Bilingual Students with their writing?  In everyday life, we come across College students who are exposed to the fear of having to compose essays, papers, or simple assignments in Standard English formats. These types of tasks can be very difficult for anyone who is new in the school, coming from other Countries. Initially, it is complicating enough for a Bilingual student to have to grasp the understanding of speaking in English however; they might also need to learn the process of writing in English. Bilingual Education is not seen as a widely conversed topic, even though, when someone really thinks about it, it becomes interesting and controversial, as well.

The problem connects to existing research in ways of how one text mentions, “…schools don’t seem to be providing student’s with “essential tools” for their writing.” (Farr and Daniels, 3) They also note how “Less than 3 percent of student’s time for classwork or homework was devoted or writing a paragraph or more.” (Farr and Daniels, 3) Upon these Author’s expressions, it seems apparent how most American schools are seen as not devoting enough time to generally explain the standards of English, such as composing simple essays or paragraphs. In addition, by not being able to correctly learn the procedures of such tasks, it will become even harder and more strenuous for students to learn how to perform the correct duties.  In order to conduct assignments, you have to know the proper processes, as well as understanding how the words are pronounced in the English language.

Additionally, Farr and Daniels mention that, “…of the time spent “writing” in English and other classes, students primarily were involved in multiple-choice and short-answer tasks. (p.3) As they say, it seems as if this is true, considering most people these days seem to have a more difficult time grasping the ideas of how English derives from concepts. For instance, the American system consists of consonants, vowels, silent letters, etc. There are a lot of “rules” in the English language, which someone might have trouble with grasping initially, especially if they need to incorporate them in a piece of writing.  Also, by simply circling letters as in multiple-choice activities, students are not learning how to understand the actual process of actually writing out letters, words, or phrases. Therefore, their capability to develop well-written documents might not perform to a sufficient stage later on.

Moreover, in a further study, the Authors express how Applebee’s states that, “…students with poor writing skills are no more likely to receive help from their instructors than better writers; and teachers spend more time criticizing student’s writing than teaching writing skills.” (p. 4) With this approach, it seems as if the text refers to how teacher’s believe in teaching their student’s all equal, whether the student be strong in the learning aspect or weak in the learning material. I believe that teachers and professors should be willing to help every one of their student’s. It is obvious, however, how there are hundreds of students per class, which creates a difficulty for teachers to meet with every single individual, meanwhile they should still be opened to offer assistance to those in need. Additionally, it is especially important for professors to provide support for students who are bilingual, considering they most likely need the most guidance. At times, when professors cannot help certain students who do not speak their language, this is where a Writing Center or Tutors come in.

Throughout a Campus, students should be able to find a Writing Center. Writing centers are not only places to go for writing purposes, however, some of them also offer the assistance of having tutors. The tutors there are usually fully trained in various subject areas, as well as most of them are Bilingual Educators. The positives regarding Writing Centers revolve around how students can go there to have a quiet place to study and write, while also receiving assistance from the trained peers. Additionally, most Campuses offer Tutoring, which refers to professionally paid students who are available to help other students with their studies, such as composing a piece of writing. Most tutors are bilingually educated these days, which is beneficial, especially for those students who are in coming from other Countries by their first Semester at a new University.

While the concern with Bilingual Education is being settled, readers of this essay can learn how there are two methods that we focus on. First, “Ethnography” reflects on how everyday people in the Society are studied based on something they are doing. Second, we will express how “Interviewing” comes into the role of a useful method based on our study of Bilingual Education. Let’s start by discussing the initial method of “Ethnography.” This one can be used throughout a Campus or a University by seeing how all kinds of people interact with one another. The ways of how fluent people speak English can sound different to someone who has never heard English before. Some would believe we have “accents” in the range of our voices, while others might not have any understanding of our words. The importance of learning English is high, considering first, someone needs to be able to say their phrases or sentences in Standard English before they begin writing something in English. The idea of “Ethnography” would be used as a way to gather data on a Campus or Community to find out how people come together as an experiment in determining how they feel when it comes to writing courses or assignments in English for College. In addition, I would use the process of “Interviewing” to go to a Writing Center or find a tutor who I could speak with to find out how they feel about assisting those students who have trouble in pronouncing English, as well as to ask them how difficult it would be to work with a Bilingual student.

Along the book of “A Tutor’s Guide”, reads of this paper can learn how …”experienced writing center tutors are accustomed to working with undergraduate, graduate, traditional, and nontraditional students.” (Ritter, p. 54) Based on this quote, we can reflect how we are able to learn to assist others, whether they are in College or not. We also learn from Ritter that, “…when working with English as a Second Language students, we encounter yet another layer of differences. ESL students bring different cultural backgrounds, writing experiences, and English language proficiency to the English writing context.” (p, 54) I believe it is important to be able to assist ESL students in any way possible to help them succeed in their classes, considering it is difficult for those students to grasp the understanding of English in a quickly manner. Additionally, with the concern of learning how to write a well-developed paper or essay in English, there is also the situation of learning the correct ways of using accurate punctuation marks in the piece of writing. For instance, most professors look for specific question marks, periods, and exclamation marks, as well as commas, apostrophes, etc.  These can be hard for new ESL students at first, however with the help or Writing Centers and tutors, the students can learn how to conduct a proper essay or paragraph, while learning how to succeed in class.

Furthermore, another reference states how …”effective teachers are people who have learned to present themselves well and to stage their classroom activities.” (Anson, p. 78) This quote relates to the thought of how teachers, tutors, Writing Centers, and professors all should provide a positive atmosphere for their students. Having a “welcoming” and positive environment can help promote a good feeling in the area or room. Also, by being patient and supportive can show the person that you are there to be of guidance and not just to “be there”; Being truly supportive can make someone feel as if they can succeed.

In conclusion, we have come to discover …”How Writing Centers and Tutors can help Bilingual Students with their writing”. It is important to realize just how many people in our world, especially today, have difficulty in speaking English, as well as having to compose a piece of writing. Not only can certain services, such as the Writing Centers or going to a Tutor ne helpful, however everyday people can also be of assistance to these students, as well. Providing guidance along with support is helpful for ESL students, while leading towards succeeding in their classes. Imagine yourself coming from a new Country, not knowing any English, and being put in the situation of having to compose an essay for your new College class. In these cases, the thought of being able to go somewhere for assistance to learn the proper techniques of Standard English would most likely be highly appreciated!

Saturday, November 19, 2011

Blog # 17 --Research Project Update

For my Research Project, I am working with the question / theory of "How can Writing Center tuturs or tutors help assist Bilingual students with their writing?" The main purpose of this question focuses on the strengths and weaknesses of how different students react to the task of writing a paper or an essay for their particular class, when they are not comfortable with speaking English. Most of the College Campus, for instance, is made up of Spanish, French, African-American, Portugese, or Italian speakers. In this case, the assignment of creating writing for someone who does not speak English can be very difficult, which is where writing centers or tutors can be on great assistance.

The methods that will be using include "Interviewing" and "Ethnography". First, "Interviewing" is important, since I would interview some of my fellow classmates whose language happens to be Spanish, Portugese, etc. to determine how they personally feel about having to conduct papers in standard English. It would be interesting for me to find out their thoughts and opinions, considering speaking other languages could build a bridge between actually "talking the language" and having to "write about it". Also, I would give my peers advice in letting them know how the Campus offers tutoring and writing centers, where they can go to gain assitance, so they will be able to succeed in their classes. In addition, I would also use the "Ethnography" method, considering ..."it reflects on studying the affects of how people speak and use their languages in Society." Everyday, hundreds of us attend meetings, conduct essays, or simply go to events, and it is important to be enable to understand the outcomes of situations, as well as to realize what our peers are saying. By using the "Ethnography" approach, it can make you learn how we, in Society, use various languages to speak, which tends to be easier than having to actually write in another language.

Furthermore, my theory uses the reference of Bruce Shanti's book, "ESL Writers: A guide for writing center tutors". This story is an example of enhancing Ethnography, upon how writing center tutors are taught to learn various types of languages, so the instructors will be able to assist their students/peers in the writing. ESL Tutors should explain English writing thoroughly and clearly, so their learners will be able to understand how to do the assignment. Additionally, writing centers have the responsibility of assisting students in learning the concept of conducting papers and other tasks. With the concern of speaking another language, the center personnel should be trained to have the ability of being bilingual, so they can help those who come in for the support.

I believe it is important for everyone to be able to succeed in the world, so no matter what language you currently speak, you should be able to learn another one. Many people struggle in our world with the battle of speaking more than one language of non-English, however that can change. Everyone can feel comfortable at some point in time to become stronger in English. That is where the writing center tutors and tutors are most importantly needed.

Saturday, November 12, 2011

Blog # 16 --Research Project

For my Research Project, I am choosing to focus on the topic of "Bilingual Education". This topic seems interesting, considering it reflects on how various people in our world speak several languages, while being in College or a school-setting. In my opinion, Bilingual Education is fascinating because it can make you realize how there are people out there who know how to conversate in either Spanish, French, English, Portugese, ... etc.

Throughout this Project, you will learn several aspects regarding "Bilingual Education", such as "How can someone learn to speak more than one language?", "Are there any classes someone can take to receive assistance and guidance in learning new languages?", "Do you need to be raised in knowing a certain language in order to speak it more fluently?", and "Could speaking a different language in class cause problems?"

Moreover, I would study this topic on the college campus by asking some of my bilingual speaker friends how they cope with language barriers. I realize how it must be difficult for them to understand how professor's speak, considering most of them usually only speak in English. Also, I want to study the topic this way because it will be interesting to me with learning how various languages could interfere and/or enable a person's education. My method would consist of "Ethnography", since it focuses on using people in society which will assist me in developing findings of data to use in reflecting my evidence.

Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Blog # 15 ...Revising Plan for DA essay

The plan that I will be following to revise my DA transcript essay is as follows:

First, I will outline a web of the important evidence that I am using to support my essay. I'll then add that information into my Introduction Paragraph to include more information about the topic  "How can the internet be safer for the A to use".

Second, I will make the body of my paragraph stronger by explaining my main points. The support of each point will be stated, followed by the examples of what the A says in the transcript.

Third, I will state a Conclusion that summarizes the whole essay as a recap. It will include questions that a reader could be able to ask his or herself by reading the transcript., which might leave them questionable or feeling good / "safe" to use the computer. I will try to provide as much evidence as possible, so that readers would be able to figure out background information regarding the transcript.

Throughout the essay, I will provide organization and structure to make the points clear, while joining them together to help promote the evidence.

Sunday, November 6, 2011

Blog # 14 ...DA Essay Feedback

In my opinion, I believe I did a good start reflecting on the "Chat Room Transcript" because I included details regarding on how the A can learn to have a safer place to go online. The A believes that they can use the internet appropriately, which is a good thing. I also provided the example of how "language" is important in the transcript by disussing ways of how the character answers Sally's questions.

Based on reading some of my peers' essays, I have learned that as a continue my essay, I will need to expand my thoughts of how the internet can be a safer place for everyone, not just the A. Also, my reflections of the transcript are going to be portrayed by the interviewer's actions, as well as from the A's reactions.

This assignment started off being very difficult for me, as I had been confused. However, by practicing the tasks and seeing my classmates views, I am becoming more understanding of what is required to be learned. I think this transcript is the simplest one, which is beneficial, considering it creates an easier format of the work.

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Blog # 13 ...Draft # 2 of the DA Transcript

For my Discourse Analysis essay, I chose to use the "Chat Room Transcipt". My main focus of the transcript reflects on how "the internet can be a safer place for the A".  The main points include how I believe that using evidence, such as the phrases, "I can do it" and "more familiar with" seem to provide a background for the thoughts of how "if I can do it, then I will know what I can and can not do something, or what I should be doing and should not be doing, and will therefore be more mature online." Additionally, such language provides a pattern of ways as to how the A speaks, showing that there conversation / interview seems to end with the A feeling "more secure" or using the Internet.

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Blog # 12 --Draft of the Transcript

For my Discourse Analysis Assignment, I chose to use the "Chat Room Transcript".

Main Question/Focus: How can the Internet make the A feel less indanger about being in a Chat Room?

Evidence: The use of Language "I was more familiar with it", "I was able to e-mail who ever I wanted", "very familiar with the internet", "I liked talking to my friends". Also, the use of Pronouns: "I" is used a lot towards the end of the Chat Transcript to indicate how the A explains how he started becoming more aware of what is a part of the internet. Additionally, it brings the focus onto him more directly. Moreover, by feeling more confident about the internet should make the A feel better about going online. Dangers can easily scare someone away from something, as with the person being interviewed by use of the Computer.